Critique Style Requested: Standard
The photographer is looking for generalized feedback about the aesthetic and technical qualities of their image.
Seen yesterday at the Memphis retention ponds.
What do you think of the poses in each of these images?
Canon R7, 200-800mm, handheld
Processed in DXO PureRaw 4 and Photoshop.
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The poses are fine, showing good interaction between the pair. Really good technique in getting these birds so sharp and like your Avocet shot they really pop against the water.
Superb interaction images, Allen. I like the poses and head turns in the first a little better, but that tuft of feathers being pulled in the second is just perfect.
glennie
April 23, 2025, 11:14pm
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The wings up pose of both birds are wonderful. The images are so energetic.
I love the first one for the colours and poses and the second one for that feather pulling .
SandyR-B
April 24, 2025, 8:28pm
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Sweet interaction! Great wing position, super detail, and very complimentary BG. Not a thing to suggest here from me- no nits at all! Lovely capture!
Hi Allen
