A Walk in the Woods

Project Overview

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Brief Project Description

I don’t know if this really qualifies as a “Project”, but it seemed a good place to see how it fit. I have begun sharing photos in a gallery of images and writing a story that begins with some version of “I Went for a Walk in the Woods”. I’d like to know how yo think this plays on social media and if the story is too long. The photos are in the order in which they “appear” in my story. Let me know what you think!

I went for a rainy walk in the woods Sunday morning. The temperature was in the low 40’s and the rain fell steadily for the entirety of the walk. My primary goal was to check on the progress of the Calypso Orchids that can be found here. I hadn’t walked more than a hundred yards before I started finding them sprinkled all along the forest floor. I found one perfect specimen standing proud in the shadowed protection of a decaying fallen tree.

Now a more steps down the trail and I thought I saw a white flower I had never seen. After stepping closer to inspect, I realized it was a fungus. Subsequent research tells me it was a rhizomorphic mycelium, which is a root-like network of fungal threads.

I have been followed by Coyotes on this trail, and its also bear country, mostly black but its within the known range of Grizzly bears, so while glancing side to side for flowers, I also looked ahead and behind me as I walked. I was approaching a Y in the trail where I know there to be a tiny forest on a large fallen log. I have tried and failed to photograph it adequately in the past and was hoping to do it justice today. Right across the trail from these tiny trees, was a patch of Globeflowers, practically glowing in the rainy gloom.

This is where I started hearing Pikas on the large talus field below towering cliffs. It’s also where I noticed the fantastic way the fog was revealing and concealing the landscape in a most compelling way. I started up to a point to get a better perspective and was immediately distracted by another Calypso Orchid, growing right out of yet another decaying tree.

I captured a portrait and a close up of this beautiful specimen. I bring an umbrella with me on trips like this, because the focus stacking method I use requires plants that aren’t moving and the rain had this little one dancing. Then, I kept moving to get to an open viewpoint of the mountains in the fog. As I captured a few images there, I heard Pikas again, this time much closer. I sat down on a clump of mossy soil and waited to see how close they might come. I got a few images of a rain soaked Pika as it went back and forth between the rock pile and some vegetation growing through the rocks fairly close to my view point.

It was such a great day for a walk and I was thrilled with all the little treasures that revealed themselves to me.

Creative Direction

I think people like to feel as if they are with me as I walk in the woods. Through the story and the images that align with what they read, I hope to take the viewer along with me. I am considering a coffee table style book of my photos with the stories I write and wonder how this type of format might work. I’d do multiple sets…single walks like this. Maybe a few sunrise to sunset, then a Milky Way to finish it off. Probably will need to through a few sets of wildflower portraits in there too. Do.you think this format would “read well”?

Self-Critique

Given the short attention span of most folks on social media, I fear the story is too long. I do think many like to read something relaxing, but others will often comment TLDR, which I had to look up the first time I saw it! In a book, maybe they could read a set of images at a time. It could be broken up into the equivalent of chapters that way, but would be easy to pick up and set down at any point.

Feedback Requested

Should the story be all in one place like this, or broken up into text that matches the image.

Presentation Goal

Book Publication

Nice set, Paul. I think your project would work as a book or zine rather than posted to social media for the reasons you’ve given. I feel the text should be broken up to match the images. That way it could be consumed in smaller bites. The reader could progress with you on your walk and not have to jump back and forth trying to match parts of your story to an image. JMHO

Paul: I find this delightful and challenging. It is also an indictment of social media. The desire for instant gratification and facile easy perusal is a curse on our times IMO. A project like this challenges people to slow down and contemplate. God forbid that we would encourage folks to THINK! The images themselves are compelling although I might pare away some of the “duplicates”. I think you could eliminate images 6, 8 and 10 and have a nicer flow. I certainly envy you the experience and commend you for the effort. >=))>

Paul, I like this project. Viewing it, I felt as if I were walking through the woods.

I agree that you need to avoid duplication.

As for social media, it’s true that some people wouldn’t have the attention span for such a project. Others would, though, and I wouldn’t be deterred by the “TLDR” people.

Paul, I am really enjoying the images. I agree with removing the ones Bill noted. Getting a nice shot of a Pika is rare since they are so reclusive.

I think such a project would make a nice book, ultimately. First, publish them and your comments to Social to see what the reactions are. These days, people have the attention span of a gnat, so keep the commentary brief. Like a walk in the woods, you want folks to stop and see the forest, but you also want them to keep walking along with you.

I suggest that you continue to accrue images and develop the commentary and once you feel you have enough content, self-publish a coffee table book. An E-zine would be nice, too, as was mentioned.

This is a nice series and certainly worth expanding!
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Wonderful series and I like the combo approach including landscapes, micro-landscapes, botanical close-ups, and pika cuteness. Social media is a poor judge of quality because it is more or less a popularity contest. I don’t pander to the masses and get my usual 8 to 12 likes and maybe a comment or two. Getting comments and critiques from outstanding photographers like you have here is more valuable than social media. This small collection is outstanding and enjoyed examining the photos displayed here–especially the rain drop covered Calypso orchid. Awesome series…Jim

Oh do I ever know this pain - little scenes like this are so great in person, but often don’t translate to a 2D image. This one does and I love the even tinier seedlings in this ‘forest’.

The orchids are really special and reminds me to go look for the Coralroot in the yard later. I’ve found the seed pod, but never the flowers.

An e-something would be ideal here. Having the text and the images together would work well for those who like this kind of thing. The orchid shots could all be included, but maybe a triptych or similar collage would work for that page/section. I found the first upwards landscape to be a bit jarring given how bright it is compared to the floor photos we had, maybe swap the placement of these with the darker one first. The pikas are a great addition - soggy and cute. The globeflowers are a nice jolt of warm color and made me smile. TLDR be damned.

Pretty nice project, Paul. I have never tried something like it. I like @Bill_Fach suggestion.