African Sunset

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Description

A misty sunset canoe trip down the Chobe River.
The hippo roars echoing through the night were a soulful sound we will never forget.

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Technical Details

Model: iPhone 13 Pro Max
Software: Adobe Photoshop 26.2 (Windows)
Date Taken: 2022-05-12 18:30:09
Exposure Time: 1/60 sec
F Number: f/1.5
ISO Speed Ratings: ISO 500
Exposure Program: Normal
Metering Mode: Multi-segment


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Man would I have loved to have been there and experienced that myself. I have no idea what a hippo roar sounds like, and I didn’t know they added to the sounds of the night.

This image works well for me as a peaceful moment. (I definitely don’t get hippo roar from it :grinning:) I love that moment as the sun gives its last gasp, and this captures it nicely. The diagonal flows of the larger tree on the right and the smaller/distant on the left is well done.

There’s a little bit of artifact (sharpening) in the tree branches, but that’s about my only nit.

Hi Sandy,
This looks like a wonderful way to end the day with the last bit of light adding some warm tones to the sky. I also like the calm water of the river and the mirror like reflections. It must have been a treat to hear the hippos roar; although I personally would not consider it soulful. For my personal tastes I would like to see just a little more detail in the shadows. Nicely done.

@John_Williams @Ed_Lowe
John and Ed - Here is a good video of hippo roars : Imagine this coming out of a dark, quiet night!

Wow; too cool. Thanks for posting!

The narration of the hippo sounds with the image are spectacular! The image itself is wonderful, I think the almost explosive sunset complements the rightside of the image with the large tree reflected in the water! Beautiful!