Bay-backed Shrike in pose + rework

Edited Image with bird in left of the frame

Original Image with bird in centre of the frame

Critique Style Requested: Standard

The photographer is looking for generalized feedback about the aesthetic and technical qualities of their image.

Description

Bay-backed Shrike are generally not shy when in comes to being near people. One fine evening, this bird decided to tolerate me and my camera and it was busy watching the sunset.

This small bird looks more beautiful in flight and hopefully one day i could capture it.

Specific Feedback

Feedbacks on aesthetic and general techniques

Technical Details

Canon EOS R7
ISO 640
400mm
f9
1/640sec

HI Santhru,
Wonderful little bird and well captured. Details and exposure look good. I would advise moving the bird off center in the frame. A move to the left with good room for the bird to face would be beneficial I think. Generally white blotches in an otherwise darker background is not considered ideal but in this case the background works for me given the frequency of the background white and that it matches some white on the bird. A tighter crop could also be considered as an alternative but I like this version with the bird in a fair amount of space. Nicely taken.

Thanks Allen. I have put the bird in the left and i agree that looks better.

A lovely catch! I think you could crop tighter to show off the bird more. The BG is nice but it competes with the bird a bit because of the brighter areas.

Thanks Diane

A beautiful bird, Santhru and very nicely photographed. I do like the reframing you did and agree with @Diane_Miller that you could probably get away with cropping a bit tighter-at least for web presentation. Normally, I prefer a head turn toward the camera a bit, but a change of attitude like this is a welcome change and does portray the bird as more unaware of the photographer.

Thanks Dennis for the feedbacks.