Before you feed the chick, you have to get to know one another.

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This set of shots is one of a group I will be posting.
Thank you for stopping by.
Peter

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Canon R5, Comin 100-500mm, F8, 363mm, 1/2500, ISO 1000, .3EV. The shots are cropped around 15% and color balanced in DXO PhotoLab 7.


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Very interesting, Peter. I’m interested in what the other images will show. This looks like it could go about anywhere, but it has me hooked to see the next set.

Love all your puffins! The yellow blobs distract me a bit, but great images!

The charm of these puffins is undeniable; their interactions always bring a smile. Peter, your capture of these three puffins on the rocky terrain is delightful and brings a real sense of their social behavior.

The composition here works well, with the trio forming a natural triangle that guides the viewer’s eye across the scene. The soft, diffused lighting helps to bring out the texture of their plumage without harsh shadows, adding a gentle touch to the overall atmosphere. The muted background rocks don’t compete for attention, allowing the puffins to stand out prominently.

This image resonates with a sense of community and connection among these birds. The way they engage with each other hints at a deeper story, perhaps of camaraderie or familial bonds, which adds a layer of warmth and intrigue. Nice one Peter!

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Love these shots. Am waiting for some more. Are the yellow areas some sort of lichen? I see evidence of some in the background. I like that the puffin in the background is out of focus. While showing its presence, it is not so much as to distract from the others which are the main points of interest. Keep them coming.

Nice interaction shots Peter. A good scene of a birds caring for one another. Looking forward to seeing more.

Hi Dennis, Sandy, Don, Jim & Allen
Thank you for the comments, yes the yellow on the rocks is lichen. The fog had lot to do with the lighting and am happy DXO PhotoLab was able to handle the color balancing and feather detail.
Peter

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  • Technical: Hi Peter, Nice interaction between the Puffins. Too bad the onlooker is OOF and a little too tight to the edge and it puts the balance a bit off for me. Like the others I’ll look forward to more images.

Hi Steve
Thank you for your comments. Once again I am guilty of the saying “you con’t see the forest for the trees”. I tend to concentrate on the highlight and not the overall story. There is room in these frames to open-up the background.
Peter