Big sister is babysitting! (+revised)

Revised Version

Revision 1 (latest)

What changed: Brightened the birds and darkened the BG, and removed the piece of OOF grass on the left. Burned down the base of the perch.

Added after receiving feedback from the community.


Original Version

Critique Style: Standard

The photographer is looking for thoughtful feedback on the image as a whole, especially around the areas noted below.

Feedback Focus: Artistic / Expressive

About This Image

This was shot 2 hours after my previous post of the baby posing at the birdbath. The baby Bluebirds have discovered the birdbath - #5

I had a feeling that was one of the second brood and this shot confirms that – the bird on the right here is one of the first brood, recognizable by some sort of dried material on its eye seen in the shots of it helping to feed the second brood. (I was worried about a disease and briefly took down and disinfected the birdbath, but in recent pictures it hasn’t gotten worse for a month now.) I’m just guessing it is a she because it was being so helpful with the feeding and I only noticed one other one doing that. That may be no indication of gender so I’m just using my imagination. But I’m not surprised to see the youngsters learning from the older siblings as well as the parents.

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All comments welcome!

Technical Details

Camera: Canon EOS R5
Lens: RF200-800mm F6.3-9 IS USM + EXTENDER RF1.4x
Focal length: 1120mm
Shutter speed: 1/350s
Aperture: f/19
ISO: 800

Basic LR global tonal work (it was shot in full sun) and denoise, then into PS for minor cleanup on the perch and some dodging and burning. Cropped to 34% of the original frame. (They were perched on a branch propped up in an open area where they like to sit to watch for bugs.) The BG is dandelions – a bumper crop this year.

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What a great scene! Love the sharp detail and the background color. :heart:

Diane,

This is an adorable photograph. I love how close they are huddled together and the subtle splash of blue in the tail against the soft yellow drops in the BG work so nicely. Each looking in a different direction adds so much story to the photo.

Excellent image, Diane. It’s hard not to give sexes to the birds,even when you have no real idea. I’ve read some accounts of people who’ve run Bluebird box lines and they are an amazing helper species. We’ve witnessed it in the ones nesting on our property now and then and it’s always a joy to see. This image captures it very well.

Thanks, @framingtheuntamed , @Youssef_Ismail and @Dennis_Plank ! I can’t express how delighted I was to see these siblings from two broods together!!

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Simply marvelous image Diane! Love seeing the three together and it’s great you can tell which brood they are from. The background is awesome too! Great aperture choice to get them all in focus. Superb!

Beautiful image! Great background. I love them all huddled together. Absolutely adorable. Maybe now my favorite baby bluebird photo.

Absolutely lovely image - the BG is great too

I did play around with the BG a bit so the birds stand out a bit.

Not sure I like my version any better - they dont look like dandelions any more
It will always be the case the eyes go to the bright yellow rather than the detail in the birds.

Regards

Huw

Thanks, @Allen_Sparks , @timothy3 and @Huw_Thomas ! And thanks to the Birds moderators, @Allen_Sparks and @Dennis_Plank for the EP – what a delightful surprise! (I’ll tell the baby birds about it!)

Thomas, that’s a very good idea – I was bothered that the BG is lighter than the birds. I don’t think you made the dandelions too dark at all. I will do a revision when I get a minute.

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Cuteness overload Diane! What can I say, but you’ve got a goldmine there with this little family.

I like where Huw was going with his edit, but my preference might be right between his and your original. Of course, always a matter of personal preference.

What an awesome capture!

Oh! And, here’s another one…even better. You’re on a roll with these little fellas.

The background suggestions might work too, but I love it as is.

Another one of yours where the story adds to an already fascinating shot. Congrats on the EP, and I’m sure you’ll get some insect response to those dandelions!

And and well deserved EP!!

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Thanks, @Lon_Overacker , @Glenys_Passier and @Mike_Friel ! And @Huw_Thomas , I’ve added a RP from your suggestion! I think it’s an improvement and probably has leeway for further tweaking. (The paint never dries with this stuff!)

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