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Lovely image. If it were mine, I would crop out the bridge on the right…it is too distracting.
I agree with Tony on both counts. Might work better just to clone out the bridge to keep the far left tree, which adds a lot.
Your emphasis on the bright seed heads and their reflections works beautifully. I also really like all of the subtle tones in the foliage. The bridge doesn’t bother me as it shows that this is a scene from a park or garden. I do wish for a bit of space at the top of the tree on the left, if there were no distractions up there.
Nice little scene. I would also lose the bridge and try to tone down the blown out whites in the grasses.

Michael,
The crop is good. I love the subtle diagonal lines moving the eye through the frame. Great light.