Bygone + Repost

Revised:

Raw file:

I’ve posted a revised version of this thistle with @Diane_Miller and @Ed_Williams suggestions. Basically cloned out the blanket flowers and reduced the saturation and the opacity of the burn/paint layers I had applied to the background. Also included the raw file just for reference.

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Description

We have fields of thistles here in the Texas hill country. They are not particularly welcome and spread like wildfires. While on my morning walks I see them everywhere and have been enjoying watching them evolve and finally getting to this stage. Just couldn’t resist trying to photograph some while blowing in the wind.
I photographed a series of this particular thistle to document it’s demise but didn’t post them here as the challenge is for one image. Maybe I’ll get a chance to post them under flora later.

Specific Feedback

I did crop a bit from each side. Does the crop work for you. Also, added a color layer and a burning layer to subdue the background a bit.
Any other thoughts would be greatly appreciated.

Technical Details

Nikon Z6ii, tripod, f/11, 1320sec., iso 800 @ 116mm (28mm-300mm). Cloudy windy day.
Post processing in ACR - for basic highlights/shadows, denoise, sharpened thistle pod. PS for background.


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I love the tumbling array of seeds, and how sharp and well-defined they are! Almost looks like one of those super-fast shutter speed motion stopping shots.

The BG isn’t ideal, but the DOF was probably necessary for the subject. I wonder about lowering contrast by bringing up darks quite a bit and desaturating greens. That might still let the seeds stand out as they are so well-defined.

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I really like the story this image tells Linda. The old thistle is breaking down and giving life as the new seeds are just beginning. I can see cloning out some of the darker spots to reduce the impact of the BG a bit.

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Thanks, @Diane_Miller and @Ed_Williams for your thoughts and suggestions. I’ve attached a revised version, along with the raw file. I think the revision work much better. Thanks again.

Or you can go even farther if you desire. This is a simple Hue-Sat layer with no masking and just working in the green channel – changing the tint, sat and lightness a little. Color is sometimes a powerful selection.

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Hi Linda, I really like your thistle image, quite interesting and admire the sharpness in all the seedlings, getting ready to take flight. I think I’ve seen the flowers here in CT…aren’t they purple cone-shaped? I doubt I could have offered the same advice as Diane and Ed, but I do see the improvement in your latest image.

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Thanks, Diane. I’ve never used that technique and just gave it a shot. Wow! Love how the changes/adjustments are very subtle. Thanks again the the suggestion.

Yes, Jim, they are purple. This image was from a different walk.

Part of what I enjoy the most about NPN is the different perspectives and suggestions. Great stuff!

Beautiful, with a visitor no less! Thanks Linda.

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