Canyon Trail # 2

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Canyon Trail stack # 2 copy # 2.jpg
Canyon Trail stack # 2 copy # 2.jpg2000×1589 2.14 MB

Canyon Trail stack # 2 copy.jpg
Canyon Trail stack # 2 copy.jpg2000×1165 1.59 MB

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Description

Another image from the Canyon Trail in Swallow Falls SP, MD. I know that I mentioned it in my last post, but this is probably my favorite trail to hike in the state of Maryland. There is just so much natural beauty on the trail as it parallels Muddy Creek and the Youghiogheny River as it winds it’s way through a small canyon as well as the largest stand of old growth hemlock and white pine trees in the state. As an added bonus you pass by three waterfalls; one of which is the highest in the state. All in all this is a beautiful area.

Specific Feedback

I have been sitting on the fence as to which crop I like better so I thought I would throw it out there and see if anyone had a preference and why. Anything else you notice please feel free to mention it.

Technical Details

Nikon Z 7, Nikon 14-30 24 mm, f 11 @ 2.5 sec, ISO 100, Kase Magnetic CPL, cable release & tripod

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I’m definitely leaning towards the original one. It’s just a feeling. There may be several reasons, most of which I don’t know. One reason is that in the horizontal image the plants on the lower and middle left seem to close to the viewer. The plants on the right are a distance that invite you to go down the path. The ones on the left are a distraction due to how close they are. Of course, if there was a flower there it would have been a welcome distraction. This is just me talking off the top of my head. The bright leaf in the bottom right is an issue as well. It’s interesting how the crop makes you seem closer to everything.

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I very much like this Rhodedendron shot with the shiny green leaves clashing against the reddish loam of the naked pathways between and I much prefer the visual depth of the squarer original crop. It is so reminiscent of certain areas of Scotland. Rhodedendron is considered highly invasive here and a plant that very much discourages the growth of any other woodland plant. I believe it even acts as a toxin to a lot of our native species and is generally disliked by nature enthusiasts in the UK. I have to say though, I very much welcome its vibrant summer blooms as I find Rhode to be a welcome relief from the never ending same shade of dense Summer green.

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Ed, I much prefer the original square crop. It has much more depth to it imho. I want to wander down that path and see where it leads.