Critique Style Requested: Standard
The photographer is looking for generalized feedback about the aesthetic and technical qualities of their image.
Description
Hello folks. I know I already posted the crescent moon from last week but I really do want some help with this one. This was the first photo I made that evening, about 30 minutes before the photo I originally posted. I know it is not easy to see, but Pleiades is there just below and to the right of the crescent. I did have to work to get the stars to show up as much as they do, and I am ok with that as the camera really did capture them. I went into more detail on how I processed the photo and showed the RAW file and how the stars were there. If anyone is interested in that you can read about it on my blog.
Specific Feedback
My question is the following. After realizing that the camera has some serious light-resolving power, I wanted to try and photograph this conjunction again. However, to the best of my ability, I cannot seem to find a day in the future when this conjunction will occur again. I know the Pleiades is near the western horizon in the month of May, so I have looked only in May using Stellarium and have gone more than 1000 years into the future and have not been able to find the crescent moon this close again.
What I want to find, is a day when the crescent is 1% to 2% illuminated (this crescent is 1.3% illuminated), and within 2 to 3 degrees from the Pleiades. Does anyone have a clue if this will ever occur again, or have I captured a truly unique occurrence?
Technical Details
Nikon D850, Nikon 400 mm f/5.6 MF lens, set at f8, 1.4 sec, ISO 100. Photographed on May 8th, at 8:34 pm. Simple processing in ACR and PS. I created a mask for the stars by carefully selecting the brightest star in the photo and then used several curves to brighten the stars so that they show up bright.
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