close-up shot of chickadee.

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REPOST of chickadee original is too bright on the screen. I went back and darkened it.

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for some reason which I cannot figure out, my JPEG images that are exported seem brighter on-screen. That was the case with this image. As a result I went back and darkened it and am reposting it

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anything that helps especially how do I make my final image dark enough.

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Good look at the Chickadee, David, with fine detail and handling of the blacks and whites. I like the perch with the yellow lichen. Actually, I think I prefer the lighter (top) image

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I agree with your decision to darken the image slightly, David. Wish I could help you with the difference between the brightness of the jpeg and the working image. It seems strange that it would do that, but hopefully someone else has seen it.

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Nice pose and details David. Wish I could help with the technical issue but Iā€™m at a loss. Love the textures shown of the bird and perch.

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Hi David
The first post shows good feather detail and eye contact, but it appears a bit too bright. I like the framing in the re-post.
Peter