Clyde Butcher’s Parking Lot 2

More gators this one from Leon’s Pond next to Clyde Butcher’s Parking Lot. This pond is right on US 41 with cars zooming by at 70 miles an hour it is filled with with wildlife who do not seem to mind.

Type of Critique Requested

  • Conceptual: Feedback on the message and story conveyed by the image.
  • Emotional: Feedback on the emotional impact and artistic value of the image.

Specific Feedback and Self-Critique

Is the head to crispy?

Technical Details

Lumix S5


Hi Steve, I like this view with the gator in dark surroundings and thus a “dark” mood to the image. I like the composition with the gator’s eyes and partial back above the water.

I like the dark mood and abstract feel to it but you somehow completely missed the focus on eyes.