Cold Water

Critique Style Requested: Standard

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Description

After a very busy autumn, mid winter has brought more time for long walk along the shores of the Baltic Sea. As always with my camera. So I have a lot of photos in both grey and colorful mood.

Technical Details

Free handOlympus 12-100 mm on 57 mm f10 , 0,5 s, iso 400


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Annika, the ice textures in the chilly blue foreground do a good job of leading my eyes to the big rock and the inviting pink in the sky. I do wonder about having the big rock centered horizontally. Having it centered does add to calm, quiet sense while moving it away from center would make the view more dyamic.

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Thanks a lot for your feedback! I think I was looking for tranquility when I shot this image.

Annika: I love the pastel color palette and the patterns on the ice. Well seen, composed, captured and presented. >=))>

Thanks a lot Bill!