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Image Description
This is a straight photo (not composited). The late afternoon sun was casting shafts of light across the algae-covered pond. It is such an unremarkable pond and, on the face of it, not so attractive covered in algae. But the light was beautiful. Beautiful light elevates most everything.
Technical Details
iPhone 16 using Project Indigo app. Processed in ACR and PS for targeted and global exposure and color adjustments. Cloned out a bunch of over-bright bits.
Specific Feedback
Do any of the lighted areas draw your eye overmuch? I evened them out because some, especially the ULC, were overpowering. Any other comments welcome, too.
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My immediate response is “dreamy.” The reflection is an abstraction and the pollen (or double exposure?) adds to the sense of things being a little unreal and swimmy. It’s not a calming effect for me; however, the color of that top layer is pollen-esque, which might be the source of my anxiety.
This is the coolest reflection image I’ve seen in a long time! The curves of the slime give it a very 3D effect. But the stuff in the UL is bothering me. Have you flipped it upside down, or done a 180?
Bonnie, this one is terrific. Oddly, I get a feeling of exuberance from looking at it. It reminds me of when I’ve looked at underwater features and reflections at the same time.
Thank you, @Marylynne_Diggs, @Dennis_Plank, @Diane_Miller, and @Don_Peters for your thoughts. They really bring home the idea that we can’t control our viewers reactions - dreamy and anxious vs. exuberant. My feeling was more in line with Marylynne’s dreamy/anxious. I can see exuberance because of the shafts of light, though.
Diane, I really toned down the ULC as it had vegetation on top of the water that was really bright. It does have a different texture than the rest of the frame. My thinking was that it added to the darker feelings this evoked in me - like Marylynne’s anxiousness.
I guess because my reaction isn’t dark at all. Maybe a bit mysterious. but for me, everything other than that UL corner is just elegant – and why should reality interfere with that? I had to give it a try.
