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I am famous for walking on water, not for my penmanship.
Regards, CC Jacana
I liked the contrast between the delicate bird and the ugly litter. A little bird that treads so lightly facing off with humanities throwaways. Close by there were two tennis balls a plastic bottle and a strange orange rubbery thing.
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ISO 125 150-600@600mm Hand held f6.3 1/640
Basic adjustments in ACR. BIG crop.
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A fine image of the Jacana, Glennie, and the white and blue pen really stands out as a disturbing element, which is what you want for the message this image conveys. The way the bird appears to be looking at the pen also helps with the message.
I hope this image inspires more people to post this kind of thing in this forum. Hopefully, there’s no one on this site that’s contributing to the litter on our planet, but it never hurts to raise awareness.
Nicely done, Glenys. I especially appreciate the posture of the bird and the fact that the pen is blurred but also easily identifiable. To me, this choice of focus and timing highlight your prioritizing life and the degree to which the pen itself is a kind of degradation.
ML
