DreamLand

Image Critiques Abstract Nature Critiques
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Critique Style Requested: Standard

The photographer is looking for generalized feedback about the aesthetic and technical qualities of their image.

Description

Pretty simple ICM. My goal of the time with these is to avoid the “you kicked the tripod” look. The scene in front of me was quite static and really not a worthy subject. But the light was warm as the sun was getting low and the warmth of the scene against the blues in the sky, were appealing.

Specific Feedback

I chose the standard critique response simply because there’s nothing really mysterious about this - it’s somewhat? obvious the source scene? But I would like to learn any first impressions you may have had. Yeah, the title directs you to what I thought of. I guess the “dreamy” part of this to me is the sky (yeah, it’s sky with some small puffy clouds on a blur.)

I’m also curious if the color palette is pleasing, or works together. I struggled and decided I was spending too much time attempting to tweak this. Plus, when presenting abstracts, hopefully most of the rules of color and saturation go out the window… provided it’s not too gaudy.

What do you see?

Your comments and suggestions most welcome! Thank You!

Technical Details

Nikon Z7ii Z24-200mm @135mm f/18 1/4s iso54, CPL
Single ICM frame

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Lon
I like ICM images that still bring some recognizable elements to visualize, as does yours. I particularly like the warmth contrasted to the sky( a slight wispiness to it adds).

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I like this one, Lon. Is it a single exposure? It almost looks like there are two kinds of camera movement.

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Thanks Don. Yes, it’s a single frame. However, I often use 2 (or more varying) movements. Even at 1/4, there is time to change directions during the camera/lens “movement.”

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The color palette works fine for me in this image, Lon. I like the simple sweep. While not as “abstract” as some, the image has a pleasant, peaceful feel to it.

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I missed this earlier and I’m glad I found it because I love it! Yes, the colors are gorgeous, the clouds just present enough and the trees so nicely suggested. No suggestions!