Drinking Tom

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Description

I captured this tom turkey drinking at our birdbath side lit by the sunset recently. No water drips, no birdbaths showing, just an openmouthed turkey pose.

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Cropping? BG sufficiently blurred?

Technical Details

Z9, 180-600 lens, Nikon 1.4 TC, monopod, 13200th, f 9.0, 840mm, ISO 16000, cropped to 4534 x 5169.

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Hi Dave, nice seeing the eye like this and that little nubby thing on top of the head. Crop looks good to me. BG looks okay to me. I see what Sandy is saying about burning down the highlights even though I think the ones on the lower neck are so far gone they’d just turn gray. Nice catch.

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Cool light through the eye of the turkey, Dave. In this case the highlights on the breast don’t bother me as they look like natural sheen and you expect that to reflect the sun.

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Hi Dave
I like the framing, highlighting the open bill and eye contact. The highlights don’t bother me, but as Sandy said you could look at reducing the lower neck some.
Peter