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Another from our Kansas trip
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comments, suggestions, nits - all welcome
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Sony A1
F10
1/2500
ISO 1800
Manual
Matrix metering
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Very pleasing singing pose. Excellent detail although the tail is a little soft. I really like the pose add the bird has an altitude. Good work.
Hi Sandy, nice pose with the open beak - definitely shows the attitude of this species. Sharpness looks good. I could see trying a version darkening the bird and background.
Thanks, @Allen_Sparks and @David_Schoen -
darkened and re-posted
Nice pose and perch, Sandy. I don’t know if you did anything to the background, but the area around the beak and between the mandibles looks a little odd to my eye.
Sandy:
That looks like it did the trick for me. It looks a lot sharper and a lot cleaner.
Thanks, Dennis - blip fixed
Hi Sandy
The repost looks much better. Nice work.
Peter
Very nice job on the repost, Sandy.
