Electric and the Lines

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Electric Lines 2024.jpg
Electric Lines 2024.jpg3712×3512 2.09 MB

Critique Style Requested: Standard

The photographer is looking for generalized feedback about the aesthetic and technical qualities of their image.

Description

Just walking around and saw this idea for an image. Lots of black and white and gray tones…

Specific Feedback

I like the tone in this image and and the mass look in the shot. Not simple but focused … and as always photography for fun. find something interesting and see what you can make of it

Technical Details

shutter 400 ISO 200 f16 edit in Photoshop

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Subject definitely lends itself to B/W, so exploring and finding something interesting works well. Shooting for the highlights in this capture, creating a dark image, does make it work. I am not sure there is anywhere for the eye to land on something that stands out, although maybe that is what you were going for, as there is repeating patterns of three. I also notice lots of white edge banding, which could be controlled more in processing, yet maybe that is intentional for you to create separation within the blacks.

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Another interesting addition to your power line images, Gill. Nicely done.