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Image Description
My wife and I were on the first day of a planned 4 day stay in Amnboseli National Park observing elephant behavior. We were picked up at the landing strip and as we were being transported to our camp, this herd of elephants were approaching us. This was one of the first images I took on the trip. I believe it shows how elephants travel led by the matriarch and are so protective of their young.
Technical Details
Sony RX 10iii camera (24-600 mm fixed lens @ 220 mm), f 5,6, 1/2000 second, ISO 400, processed in Photoshop and the Nik Silver Effex Pro.
Specific Feedback
Does this image convey what I tried to accomplish in understanding an aspect of elephant behavior?
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