Everglades Barred Owl

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Overall I like it. The small bit of red on the tree trunk on lower left is a nice color contrast to the green at the top of the frame. The small amount of daylight left adds to the image IMHO but does not take away. I also feel the greenery breaks up an other wise colorless background.

Creative direction

Looking for a natural image of a barred owl in an area that is not too thickly covered in vegetation.

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Overall lighting and composition. I like the crop but always looking to improve so hope to get your thoughts via feedback. I know this could be a nice vertical but I like that horizontal views anchors the perch the owl is on.

Technical Details

Nikon Z8, tripod, ISO 6400, 180mm, F6.3 and 1/800th

Processed in LR and DXO for noise reduction only

Description

We were in the Everglades chasing owls around but never got a good image. Heard lots of Who Cooks For You calls though. On the way back to the car we came upon this beauty patiently watching us. Got lucky for sure.


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2 Likes

This is beautiful Andrew. I like the natural look to this. The owl just blends in so well with the BG, I can see why it would be so hard to find them. I want to move the owl one way or the other in the frame, rather than quite so centered, but I think your crop actually works quite well here, mostly because the bird blends in so well to the scene.

Excellent image! Beautiful owl, great environment, sharp detail and soft lighting.
A little more room at the bottom might be good, and also would not cut off that nice red touch of the lower left leaves. A few artifacts/blips there to clean up, if you wanted…
Really fine work!

A gorgeous image with wonderful detail!! The formal composition, with the owl centered, works well for a creature at rest, surveying its environment. The perch is a perfect matching color, as is the soft gray of the BG. I love the twig of leaves in the LL corner. Very well done!

Oh such a serene, regal creature. The very light palette is so interesting. I like it for the way it shows how well the owl blends in to its surroundings. Stealthy death from above. Excellent sharpness through the bird. Maybe a bit too much exposure on it…with this kind of backlighting, I expect more shadows where it’s sitting. I think bringing back shadows with some masking might also add more contour and modeling to the feathers. Such lovely soft light, really perfect. Congrats on a lovely portrait.