Critique Style Requested: Standard
The photographer is looking for generalized feedback about the aesthetic and technical qualities of their image.
Description
Second ICM image of Fenwick at 7am. Multiple exposure (2) of same spot on beach.
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When it comes to ICM/abstracts any and all feedback is appreciated. Does it evoke a peaceful response? How about multiple exposure as an added effect to ad to the rhythm in the image?
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1/5 sec, f/2.8, iso 200, 33mm
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Another beautiful ICM from this area, Mario. The light, particularly that on the land, is I think what appeals to me most in the image.
Hey Mario,
Looks like I have some catching up to do! Been traveling so not much time for NPN lately.
This is another wonderful ICM/ME-ICM. A seascape ICM if you will. I really like the balance between the surf, beach and sky.
I like this very much as presented. However, to your question, for me, no, this does not evoke a peaceful response. Not a bad thing though. The darker, heavier contrast and saturation evokes more of a dark, moody almost haunting feeling. To me, a much lighter, more pastel, “fluffy” presentation would seem more peaceful to me. Again, not a bad thing, just the way I’ve interpreted this image.
I could see an alternate presentation, perhaps cropping up from the bottom to remove the brighter surf in the LR. And then as I was thinking, more luminosity, less contrast, you might be able to bring to a more peaceful scene.
No matter, this is still a beautifully executed ME/ICM.
