Fenwick 5

Critique Style Requested: Standard

The photographer is looking for generalized feedback about the aesthetic and technical qualities of their image.

Description

Storm approaching this am.

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Any and all appreciated.

Technical Details

f/13 , 1/3 sec, iso 320, 70 mm


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Beautiful softness with your slow shutter speed. And I like the darkness of the right side vs. the light on the left. Great!

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Thanks Mark. Actually an ICM at that speed.

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This one is a bit more ambiguous to me, however of all the posts, this one is getting closer to “peaceful.” Again, this is just me, but the softer contrast and colors leaning towards pastels gives me a much more calming reaction. And I think the ambiguity is more relaxing - at least for me.

I can’t wait to get to the coast for an ocean sunset to try my hand!

Thanks for sharing Mario!

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