From Mono Carter Looking West

Redo

Critique Style Requested: Standard

The photographer is looking for generalized feedback about the aesthetic and technical qualities of their image.

Description

Revisiting older images. While working in Eastern Sierras, during Covid I could not get into Yosemite and discovered Mono Lake.

Specific Feedback

Tonal quality - all things

Technical Details

Lumix G9

Very nice!! There is an interesting variability in the mountains. I love the way the sweep of the clouds on the right echoes the sweep of the mountains on the left. The FG is well-proportioned and on the right it leads the eye up into the mountains. I think the tonalities are very well-handled.

Absolutely minor thoughts: The wisp of lighter clouds right at the top edge is a very minor eye-pull, and I wonder about a subtle burn of the FG on the left. But lovely in any case!

Your location was “Mono Crater” – you can edit the title by clicking on the pencil icon at the bottom of the post.

Well done. Black and White was a good choice for this one.