Redo
Critique Style Requested: Standard
The photographer is looking for generalized feedback about the aesthetic and technical qualities of their image.
Revisiting older images. While working in Eastern Sierras, during Covid I could not get into Yosemite and discovered Mono Lake.
Tonal quality - all things
Lumix G9
Very nice!! There is an interesting variability in the mountains. I love the way the sweep of the clouds on the right echoes the sweep of the mountains on the left. The FG is well-proportioned and on the right it leads the eye up into the mountains. I think the tonalities are very well-handled.
Absolutely minor thoughts: The wisp of lighter clouds right at the top edge is a very minor eye-pull, and I wonder about a subtle burn of the FG on the left. But lovely in any case!
Your location was “Mono Crater” – you can edit the title by clicking on the pencil icon at the bottom of the post.
Well done. Black and White was a good choice for this one.
