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Rework - slightly more sky contrast / structure with NIK.

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An area in southwestern Utah near Capitol Reef NP. Photographed at sunrise after an overnight rainfall.

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Wista DXIII 4x5 - Schneider APO 120mm lens - Velvia 50 QL.


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Paul, The way the formations on the right angle up towards the large tower on the left feels like an ancient religious site. The bright green/yellow in the ground makes a good color contrast. Have you tried for a bit more contrast in the right 2/3rds of the sky…I’m debating with myself if that would add to the view or detract from the focus on the rock formations…

Paul: I’ve been wanting to get to Utah and Capitol Reef and Arches for a long time and this boosts the urge. Very cool scene superbly composed and captured. Most excellent. >=))>

@linda_mellor @Mark_Seaver @Bill_Fach
Thank you each for the review and comments.
Mark, I will take a look at that area of the sky and see if I can tweak more out of that area.
Bill, lots of dramatic geological formations throughout the SW Utah open desert locations. The area was a bi-annual trek for me over the years but as age and family issues have taken over I’ve had to drop it off my list as of late.

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Is it maybe my monitor, or did a little noise or artifacting get introduced when you tried to increase the sky contrast? I noticed it on the expanded view. For some reason, the image made me think of a leader ahead of a group of followers, plus his “dog” sitting behind them. Just my crazy imagination!

Denise, thank you for taking time to review and comment on this scene… :+1:
I’m not seeing the possible noise item on the adjusted image at this size or on the NPN site here. At least not on my monitor. I appreciate you mentioning the issue and I will surely review the larger image for possible sky noise there… :sunglasses: