Critique Style Requested: Standard
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Description
High point in Joshua Tree NP at sunset.
Specific Feedback
Composition. I know some will not like the blown out area of the sun but I think it works. Others thoughts?
Technical Details
iso 100 20mm f/4.5 1/200 sec
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Hello Mario. Just a friendly reminder. To ensure that all members have a fair opportunity to receive thoughtful feedback and to maintain a high quality of critique, a posting limit of one image per member per day applies across all critique categories. This means you may only post one image total, in any of the critique categories, each day. Thank you.
I’m not normally the post police, but it’s my responsibility and it’s to everyone’s benefit. I hope you don’t mind me pointing this out publicly, but we’ve had a few double posts lately, and I think other posters might be more inclined to read responses than the Guidelines.
As for the composition, I like it. But as you stated, I do have a problem with the blown out sky. I’m not normally concerned to make sure there’s ZERO clipping when looking at the sun, cause if you tried to look at it in real life, there would be some clipping. But I feel it’s just too large an area. maybe if it was smaller in the frame. I do love how it’s illuminating areas of the FG.
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