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I was inspired by the mirroring of the clouds and rocks to each tree.
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iso 100 25mm f5.6 1/500 sec
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@Mario_Cornacchione. Love the “mirroring” look. 2 foreground rocks; 2 trees; 2 mountains; two clouds. I wonder if cropping the top to a square format might be a possibility. Not sure, because I like it as presented. Just another idea.
I like the repetitive elements here. I love the tonality and color of the clouds, but I feel the foreground rocks and Joshua trees need to brighten up a bit. @Jim_Gavin’s idea for a crop from the top is an interesting idea.
BTW: Post lager images! You can post images to 1500px on the long side.
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I like the idea of making this a square crop. I think that might make for a stronger crop.
I don’t know if this is a composite image but if it is it would be helpful if you stated that. I think that you would get feedback on the process itself and whether the merged parts work well together. I also seem to remember reading somewhere that NPN requests that all merged images be stated so but I’m not sure about that.
