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Back at the North Farms Reservoir on March 4 at 7:18 AM. I think the title works of this frame.
Thank you for coming by.
Petter
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Z8, Nikon 180-600mm & 1.4ext, f9, 300mm, 1/1600, ISO 12,000 and a 30% crop in DXO PhotoLab 8.
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I like the title, Peter. It really fits the scene. I do wish those four out of focus foreground swans weren’t there. The in-focus gaggle of geese with the rest in the background would have conveyed the same feel, I think and been a more pleasing composition for my personal taste.
Nice collection of birds Peter. That’s quite a gathering which pose interesting opportunities for photography. Agree with Dennis about the birds in front.
Hi Dennis & Allen
Thank you for the comments, I was following the two Swans in mid frame when I shot the photograph and I agree about the front three Swans. Here is a repost with one of the Swans removed, cloning is not a high point in DXO PhotoLab.
Peter
