Lap #2

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Description

As the Swans circled the Reservoir, the flew right by me.
Thank you for stopping by.
Peter

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any

Technical Details

Canon R5, Canon 100-500mm & 1.04ext, f8, 420mm, -.7EV, 1/1600, ISO 200, and cropped by 40%. I used control points to control the white hot spots.

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So which one won, Peter? Another couple of very nice shots of these swans.

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Peter - nice image of these guys. It’s hard to catch them before they pass, so you have more of a head-on or at least a parallel shot. This shot is just a bit past, but still a good image.

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Hi Peter, nice catch even though I agree with Sandy the birds are a little past us. Good exposure on the whites. Nice wing position and love seeing the long necks.

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Hi Dennis, Sandy & Allen
Thank you for the comments. I posted this frame because I like the winds passion.
Peter

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You have some very nice detail in these swans and the whites look well handled.

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Hi Allen
Thank you for the comment.
Peter