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Description

Another photograph from by porch. Thank you for stopping by.
Peter

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any

Technical Details

Canon R5, Canon 110-500mm, f7.1, 500mm, 1/800, ISO 1600, cropped by 20% , used a control point to lower the whites in DXO PhotoLab 8.

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Sweet, Peter. Nothing like a Chickadee in prime plumage with that inimitable little head turn. I like the dappled light you had and your treatment of it. Very well done.

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Nice diagonals in the image Peter and I like the catchlight in the eye. Background seems pleasing to me. I would have liked more of a head turn in our direction but this is still a nice catch.

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Very nice!! Good detail and tonalities, and the perch and BG colors are perfect for this bird!

I hope you’ve got a feeder setup going – you have a nice BG and from your porch is wonderful – close to the coffee pot for catching that lovely early morning light!

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A very good catch of the Chickadee, Peter. Maybe use a control point to lower the bright patch on the left too? You’ve done a fine job on the bird’s white.

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Nice exposure Peter. An interesting angle.
I would consider lowering the exposure in the left bright background

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Hi Dennis, Allen, Diane, Sandy, Mike, & Karl
Thank you for the kind words. I have a renewed appreciation for all of the photographs posted of these small bird. Peter
Ps I played with lowering the white and background, but I just didn’t like the outcome.