LAVENDER SWIRL

Critique Style: Standard

The photographer is looking for thoughtful feedback on the image as a whole, especially around the areas noted below.

Feedback Focus: Artistic / Expressive

About This Image

Another windy day shot from the lavender farm. This has ICM, wind effect and a multi exposure. It is cropped to about 80% of original.

Feedback Requested

There was a small amount of white lavender in the left side. Does it distract too much? Not sure how to deal with it if it does.

Technical Details

5DMKIV; 24/70 @70; daylight; 1/15th; ISO: 100; F22; -1/3rd; some brightness added along with saturation.

Hi Jim. This abstraction works well and the white lavender is fine where its at. I see some lateral lines on the RH side of the image that could be softened up to make them less obvious. The swirling pattern looks good. Lots of rich color and the lavender field made for an unusual and color abstract image…Jim

Jim: I liked your original capture of the swirling lavender but I like this one even more. The hints of greater detail make this more alluring for me. One thing I love about images like this is their uniqueness that can never be duplicated. Most excellent.>=))>

@Jim_Zablotny Thanks for the comments. I think the lateral lines were caused by a brief horizontal camera movement. @Bill_Fach Thank you, especially the “(m)ost excellent.”

Jim I love the abstract feel and color of this image. I’m inspired to try this kind of thing more. ICM just isn’t something I ever think of but it’s quite apparent I should. This is beautiful.

That makes perfect sense. As Bill said “unique”!..Jim

Jonathan, Thank you. I don’t usually think about ICM, but with the wind blowing so hard (and Lon’s recent wonderful images), I thought it was a great time to have at it. I also think it would have been a good time for using a ND filter and a tripod, but I did not have either with me. Seems like wheat fields would present good opportunity for similar shots.

Oh My! I just love this one too! I just love the soft and whispy patterns the lavender have created in the windy conditions AND how you’ve taken that motion even further. Outstanding work and image!

What comes to mind is the age-old classic saying, “When life gives you lemons, make lemonade.” You’ve certainly embraced the crummy conditions and created something beautiful. And Thank you btw!

Thank you for your comments and the inspiration.