From a recent ski trip to Jackson, NH. When I think of leading lines, rivers and railroad tracks always come to mind. I included part of the bridge I was standing on to frame the bottom partâŚdoes that work? The tree branches on the left were a bit annoying but I wanted to maintain the ridge line of the mountains.
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Ji, this is a very compelling scene. The different elements provide lots of areas to explore. The meandering stream leads the eye through the image, and itâs very well-balanced.
My only suggestions are these:
the wood at the bottom detracts a little, as does the bits of tree branch on the upper left.
I feel the image would be even stronger if these elements were removed.
Really sweet shot!
Jim: As an avowed cold hater I canât say that I wish I was there but this does look good. I agree with Sandy regarding the tree branches on the left side but theyâre not egregious. I kind of like the railing, especially the weathering on it, and feel it provides an anchor. I would be sorely tempted to make the footprints go away. Nicely seen, composed and captured. >=))>
Hi Jim,
Lots to like here and the stream is perfect for taking the viewer into this winter scene. The colors are lovely as is that building. My only suggestions are the three already mentioned by @SandyR-B and @Bill_Fach. I hope you do not mind, but I did a quick rework with those suggestions in mind. Just my opinion of course.
Jim, I agree that this is a very pleasantly inviting view along this little stream. As someone who has led tracking classes, I enjoy the tracks and the fact that they clearly lead to where the person on the left broke through the ice and then both people turned around, with the person who broke through taking very small steps. Iâm fine with the bridge railing and think that the weathered paint fits the quiet calmness of the scene. but agree that making the branches in the sky on the left disappear âcleansâ up the viewing.
@Ed_Lowe, @Mark_Seaver, @Bill_Fach, and @SandyR-B, thank you for your thoughtful comments and encouraging words. Ed, I do like your enhanced version; it makes the scene stronger overall. I liked the footprints because they told a story within the scene, but they were a distraction also.
I included part of the bridge I was standing on to frame the bottom partâŚdoes that work? The tree branches on the left were a bit annoying but I wanted to maintain the ridge line of the mountains.