Malheur Sparrows

Image Critiques Avian Critiques
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Brewer's Sparrow.jpg
Brewer's Sparrow.jpg2238×2768 1.39 MB

Brewer’s Sparrow

Chipping Sparrow-NPN.jpg
Chipping Sparrow-NPN.jpg2500×2023 1.33 MB

Chipping Sparrow

Lark Sparrow-NPN.jpg
Lark Sparrow-NPN.jpg2500×2000 910 KB

Lark Sparrow

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More images from Malheur NWR.

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Canon R5

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You had a great trip!
What a great singing pose in the first image! ad a sweet perch and BG too. Seems a little centered, so you might consider moving the bird a good bit to the left, if possible., and perhaps burn down the bright areas of the bird as well.
#2 - another great pose and BG. You mightalso burn down the bright areas on the bird.
#3 - nice back pose and head turn!
A nice series - looking forward to more from this trek!