"Mosaics"

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Does it makes sense to keep the bottom part of the image?

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Image Description

I spent a weekend camping in central Portugal, hoping to get in a few good days of photography. Unfortunately, contrary to what I’d expected, the weather ended up being hot, sunny, and windy.
Regardless, I tried my best to make the most of what I found, and this small cove in the mountainside next to the road was one of the highlights of the weekend.
I worked on the scene for quite a while and ended up with this composition, which I really like. I tried doing an automatic focus stacking with several images, but I didn’t think Photoshop would achieve a good result (let alone that I could fix the process), so I ended up manually stitching together just two photos.

Technical Details

Nikon Z7ii
Nikon 24-120

Specific Feedback

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1 Like

Joao, this photo really drew me in. The somewhat painterly top and the more realistic bottom work well together. The colors are terrific. Ordinarily the 50-50 split between the scene on the top and the one on the bottom might seem less than optimal but here I think it works. I think the photo is excellent.

I had to hunt for something to criticize. At the top center you have a very bright rock that I think it might be advisable to dim a bit.

Thanks for sharing this one.

I’m with @Don_Peters on this one, it draws me in. My initial reaction was attraction.

As he notes, the colors are terrific, and the contrast in colors and textures between the top and bottom is fascinating. For me, the photo is much stronger with the bottom, specifically because of that contrast.

No nits; I’d be proud of this one.

Hi Joao,
This took me a moment to figure out what I was viewing, but it was well worth once I figured it out. I am with @Don_Peters and @John_Williams about keeping the bottom half of this image for the reasons they already mentioned. I love the color palette as well as the juxtaposition of vegetation against the warm toned rock. You most certainly made the most of the conditions you were dealt! Beautifully done; no suggestions from me.

I think this is an outstanding image. I love the contrast between the hard lines and right angles of the inorganic rock and the more flowing and softer organic FG. I like the crooked mouth smiley face in the BG :woozy_face:

I like the colors and the color contrast between top and bottom. The only change I would make is to make this a 4x5 vertical by removing some of the bottom.

Absolutely keep the bottom. The contrast between the bottom and the top is what makes this image so inviting. I would crop off some of the bottom of the frame to just above where the two dark spots are in the right corner and the left corner. It would also make the image feel less 50/50 which is not ideal. Otherwise, I LOVE this image and the bottom is the glue that hold this one together and makes it so interesting.