The photographer is looking for generalized feedback about the aesthetic and technical qualities of their image.
Description
Trees grow vertically, we tend to think, and that is true. However, they also grow horizontally by means of their branches. The latter growth is determined by the light coming from above, the spatial relations to other branches of nearby trees, and by the age of the individual branches. During winter, snow enhances the bare structure and age of the branches. As I passed these threes on a frosty day, I noticed how these branches — some with foliage and some bare — provided a kind of open inventory of growth and decay.
Specific Feedback
All comments are welcome, but I am particularly interested in comments on the textures and structures in the image. Is there sufficient differentiation between the naked and snow-covered branches in the middle and the branches to the sides?
Technical Details
Camera: Nikon D850
Lens: Sigma 85 mm, f3.5, ISO 100
Critique Template
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Leo, this is an intriguing study of texture and contrast. I am drawn to the largest tree with its dark bark and snow-covered branches. That’s where my eye is naturally drawn.
I wonder if a tighter crop would simplify the image and emphasize the central area. I cropped to the area that most caught my eye. I’m not sure if your image can be cropped that tightly, or if you would have had to do it in-camera when you decided how much of the scene to include. The screenshot shows the vignette I used.
Please know I find this an enchanting view of the place you live. Thanks for sharing.
Hi Leo, Thanks for sharing this beautiful image. I think the B&W treatment is a lovely choice, but I do have a concern that the contrast might be a bit too strong, particularly on the left side of the image, to give the feeling of growth and vitality you are looking to present. Hope this helps!
