Critique Style Requested: Standard
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Description
Cardinals are rarely cooperative and most show up at the feeders during twilight. The bright reds become muted at that time enabling the brightly colored males to evade predators. This one was photographed late morning and he’s probably complaining about the 18-degree temperature.
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I used a 8x10 horizontal crop. Would you prefer a more vertical comp?
Technical Details
Z9 180-400mm with 1.4 TC engaged 560mm (1/2500 sec at f8.0, ISO 2500) DeNoise, Levels, bump up in exposure, Crop for Comp, Rubber stamp tool to remove distracting branches.
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Beautiful, detailed look at the Cardinal, Jim. I think the crop works as it gives the bird room to complain into.
Beautiful reds, Jim. I don’t think you could get a good vertical crop out of this with the fairly horizontal pose of the bird. The perch makes the crop just a bit awkward for this. If you removed the tip of the twig to the old bud, you could crop in a bit more from the left and bottom, which might be an interesting alternative.
Hi Jim, wonderful details on the bird where it matters and nice color rendition. Love the open beak too. The muted background sets off the birds nicely. I like this crop and I think a vertical version would also be attractive if desired.
Really excellent control of color here
Nothing too flashy!
This is the way a cardinal should look.
Gorgeous pose, detail and color!! I could see a square crop from the right. The vertical branch makes that work for me, but not sure I can justify it. Maybe the branch divides it too close to half and half with nothing on the right.
Hi Jim
Great reds nd blacks. The eye contact and open beak and nailed the photograph.
Peter
