Dale, this is a nice shot with a lot of potential that can be enhanced via processing tweaks. This is a case of taking a good image up a notch via processing.
I basically like the concept of your composition, the rocks and pool are the stars here, and I like that you placed them in a diagonal flow. Starting from the LLC, the rocks go from left to right, then it switches back to right to left, which is very dynamic. IMO, I’d like to see a little more of the rocks to the right, it feels cramped there. And I could see a little less of the far left side, the water there is not as interesting as the rocks on the right. Since to me, the rocks and pool are the stars, I could see a crop from the top, which makes the foreground more prominent, and does not lose that much color in the sky.
I think the dynamic range could be better balanced here, the brightest parts of the sky are blown out, and I’d like to see a little more detail in the rocks. You did not say if you used a Grad ND filter here, but I would have done that, or bracketed exposures to blend them, this scene is beyond the dynamic range of your sensor / Lightroom. I think that white part of the sky is probably unrecoverable, unless you increased the exposure a lot in LR processing, in which case the raw file may still have it.
Regarding saturation, your most saturated colors are in the sky, pool, and rock highlights near the pool. Within Lightroom you can use the HSL saturation sliders to reduce saturation in these colors, use the TAT tool to pick the most saturated colors, and drag to reduce saturation. I prefer instead to use the TK Actions Panel Saturation masks to target the most saturated colors for adjustment. TK does a better job of targeting only the most saturated colors IMO.
I could also see dodging the highlights in the rocks (where they are already receiving light), to create a bit more definition/interest in the rocks.
This image has a good starting foundation, I think some re-processing work can take this image up a notch.