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Does this invoke an emotional response or is it mainly an aesthetic reaction to the strong graphical shapes?
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Image Description
Wandering along the Merced River in Yosemite in mid-day, the light is harsh on the water and rocks, even in late fall. The strong contrasts created by the bright light can be eye catching, though. I spent some time with the little graphic scene.
Technical Details
Cropped to a square, run through ACR denoise, targeted exposure adjustments through dodging/burning.
Specific Feedback
Do the proportions of the various shapes look ok? Is there too much of the reddish boulder?
Critique Template
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My first thought was curious and then appreciation for the graphic nature, Bonnie.
The angle of the light and the formation of the rocks create a pleasing composition. Nicely seen for sure.
Ok, Bonnie, just read your description. Looks like you have perfectly captured what you were after. Great shot!
Bonnie, for some reason my mind saw a pair of planets. The bright specks in the dark water appeared like stars. Quite an engaging image! Then I noticed the geometric shapes and lines.
I love the mystery of this image, Bonnie. I looked and looked and have a hard time understanding what I’m looking at I. The dark lower part of the frame. All I can see is a field of pinpoint stars in the black of outer space! I love the abstractness of this.
I have looked at this several times. I like it very much but I’m not sure why. I guess I like the combination of shapes and colors, and textures. I’m glad you decided to not remove the bubbles on the surface.
Well, maybe it’s best to take it apart. I like that black edge near the bottom as it comes to the green water. That’s my favorite part. I also like the large boulder on the left for it’s color but mostly for the texture. I guess that’s the ‘moon’ part of the image. I like the brown rock for it’s color. Overall, I like the image for its liquid mystery.
Cool - I always like getting something spacey in a photo.
Yes, that is certainly the most striking line in the frame. I also like the subtle light reflections where the gray and brown boulders touch the water.
I have read somewhere that when we look we are attracted to hard edges in paintings most of all. They discovered this by recording the location and eye movement of viewers of a painting in a museum. The eye goes from hard edge to another.
Hi Bonnie! I’m compelled to keep coming back to this image, I love it so much. This is so nicely seen. I wanted to share that this image reminds me very much of the work of an accomplished fabric artist in my community, Merle Axelrad, who creates giant canvases of rocks and water out of fabric collage. The detail and textures of the rock, the quality of the light and the reflections in the water are just lovely.
Hi Beth - Thanks! And thanks for pointing me to Merle Axelrad’s art. Holy Cow! It is amazing. Looking through her website, I checked out the Rocks and Water collection. She has one that looks a lot like mine here (or more properly, mine looks like hers!).
BTW, I enjoyed your recent show at Viewpoint, with Chuck K & Michael G, and heard your talk at the reception. Your work is certainly inspirational.
