Minor repost: Delete the small branch on the upper left edge per Mark Seaver’s recommendation.
Critique Style Requested: Standard
The photographer is looking for generalized feedback about the aesthetic and technical qualities of their image.
Description
I tried to compose the image to guide your eye from the bottom right to the left and then back up to the right; also included a low hanging tree branch in the upper left-hand corner to create a canopy of sorts. I like the water’s blue color which is in the shade transitioning to the water’s green color which is in open sunlight. This blue to green further leads the eye from the bottom to the top, and is what caught my eye.
Specific Feedback
I’m hoping this meets the “Ecotones” shot requirements!
Technical Details
Camera: Fujifilm XT-3
Lens: XF16-80mm at 69.3 mm
Aperture: f/11
ISO: 160
Tom, there’s a fine vertical eye movement here with a bit of a swoop along the rocks. The tree branch at the top does a good job of focusing attention on those lovely reflections. There a small branch and it’s reflection peeking in along the left edge that could be removed for the sake of “cleanliness”.
Thank you, Mark… I’ll try the edit and hopefully can figure out how to post it correctly so the first and edit show up!
Tom, When you open the editing on the original, the first thing you see is the original post image. You can put your cursor in front of that. Hitting the upload button then makes the repost the first image with the original showing below. The repost looks good.
Oops, I just tried to follow my advice and it doesn’t work! Now I have to do some exploring…This may turn into a question for David Kingham.
Continued exploration…
When you open the edit window, there’s a small “M” with a down arrow. That changes to a different editor, which does let you position the new version. The text that begins with ![photoname.jpg… is what loads your image. In this editor, you can put your cursor first and hit return. Then the new version will load above the original and you can add text where ever you want to. (That’s complicated!!!)
Thanks Mark, for next time these instructions.
You know I have struggled with the website but I realize a new site would be costly in many ways… perhaps in the future it might be something members could contemplate chipping in for? If everyone donated $100, again perhaps, David could see his way to a new branded site based on simplicity? I’d be happy to put some money where my mouth is!
And thank you for your constructive reviews… NPN has helped keep my interest in getting out there and improved my photography skills.
Warmest regards,
Tom Marin
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Nice pleasant image, Tom. I’m enjoying the colors and the nice quiet vibe.
Thank you, Michael … it was peaceful there.