Sierra Sunset

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Critique Style Requested: Standard

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Description

I took this last night while waiting for the super moon to show up a little later above the clouds (unsuccessfully).

Specific Feedback

I played with the brightness and contrast some on this. Look about right?

Technical Details

Z9, 180-600 lens, Nikon 1.4 TC, tripod, 1/250th, f 8.0, 252mm, ISO 100, cropped to 8256
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Maybe a bit too warm? The blue sky has an unnatural color to it.

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Nice drama in those clouds Dave. (Hopefully they didn’t mess up your chance at the moon!

This seems a bit dark overall to me; I think it could be opened up a bit more. I agree with Igor that the color seems a bit off. Maybe less yellow?