Silence

Image Critiques Weekly Challenge
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Critique Style Requested: Standard

The photographer is looking for generalized feedback about the aesthetic and technical qualities of their image.

Description

Late evening was a perfect time to photograph the illuminated Bessemer Furnace’s of the of the once powerful Bethlehem Steel Works.

Specific Feedback

A comments are appreciated

Technical Details

Sony a 7R MIII with a 16-40 f/4 lens 3 sec @ f/16

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Wow, this is reeally cool! I love the different coloured lights and how they reflect in the glass. The perspective is great.
My only small suggestion would be to clone out the small bits of building on the left edge.

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Sandy, I appreciate your suggestion and will give the Remove Tool a chance to clean
up the area. The venue is in a continuing state of reclamation and repurposing - It still presents the photographer with a variety of subject matter .

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This is really eerie James. I love the colors, light and the tones in this image. I agree with @SandyR-B on cloning out the little bits of building on the edge. This is one for the wall.