Silence

Critique Style Requested: Standard

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Description

Late evening was a perfect time to photograph the illuminated Bessemer Furnace’s of the of the once powerful Bethlehem Steel Works.

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A comments are appreciated

Technical Details

Sony a 7R MIII with a 16-40 f/4 lens 3 sec @ f/16


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Sandy, I appreciate your suggestion and will give the Remove Tool a chance to clean
up the area. The venue is in a continuing state of reclamation and repurposing - It still presents the photographer with a variety of subject matter .

This is really eerie James. I love the colors, light and the tones in this image. I agree with @Sandy_Richards-Brown on cloning out the little bits of building on the edge. This is one for the wall.