Startled

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Critique Style Requested: Standard

The photographer is looking for generalized feedback about the aesthetic and technical qualities of their image.

Description

Walking along a Texas beach, I had this curlew in my viewfinder, when a kid yelled from a parking lot . That startled the bird into a nice pose. Sorry he got scared, though…

Specific Feedback

comments and suggestions most welcome

Technical Details

Sony A1
200-600@550
Software: Adobe Photoshop 25.12 + DxO Pure Raw 4
Exposure Time: 1/1600 sec
F Number: f/5.6
ISO Speed Ratings: ISO 400
Exposure Program: Manual
Metering Mode: Multi-segment

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I love the raised wings, Sandy. I didn’t realize they had that reddish tinge underneath. Very cool.

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Hi Sandy, beautifully rendered plumage. A real treat to see. I could see adding more room on the left. Nice catch.

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Great color, detail, and pose. I could see a bit more room on the left as well.

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Nice work capturing the moment and getting the colorful underwing, Sandy. The curlew looks very sharp and techs look very good. Second others’ suggestion about a little more room on the left, if you have that option.

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Hi Sandy
The clarity of this photograph is amazing. By the way everything in this photograph is cool.
Peter