This above image, taken at 6:50:23pm, was captured exactly 50 sec. before the posted photo below. You can see the adjacent row of cypress trees (and horizon line), where I had just completed seeing the sun set below the horizon. It shows the horizon better. I was looking for a composition that might work for a later Milky Way, then turned back to see the sun again, which did not make sense to me. I then started shooting again. Note - The marine fog layer was actually >290 mi. off the coast at 4:56pm, when I took a screen shot of the NOAA satellite view. The marine layer would have been way beyond my view. and not in front of the sun.
I am also putting up this other shot capture (below), taken at 6:51:42 pm where the sun was actually setting upward at that time.
By 6:56:26pm (photo below), I could still see a flat glowing bar on the horizon about much larger than the width of the sun. The sun was well below the horizon by this time.
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I was framing the setting sun through the coastal cypress trees along the Pacific Coast when it manifested below the horizon.
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Image Description
My initial shots were captured with the setting sun through the trees. I was then going to capture the silhouette of the trees against the orange glow between golden and blue hour, having reset my camera for darker conditions while hand-holding…then the sun showed up on the surface of the water.
Technical Details
1/8000s at f/8, -2.0 EV @ ISO 3200
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I am not exactly sure what contributed to the sun’s reflection on the water!
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