The Four Mile River family

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This family gave me around two minutes to get into position to get this photograph.
Four Mile River, May 4, at 10:15 AM.
Thank you for stopping by.
Peter

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Canon R5, Canon 100-500mm & 1.4ext, f9, 560mm, -.7EV, 1/1600, ISO 640 and cropped in DXO PhotoLab 7 by 10%.

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More cute goslings! It’s an epidemic! A very nice grouping of the youngsters, Peter. I do wish mom(?) Was facing the same way, but the goslings are the real subject here.

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Nice family grouping here Peter. I particularly like the pose of the last gosling trying to catch up. Agree with Dennis about the adult’s face angle but this is still a cute shot of the moment.

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Nice family shot. Is the last one saying “what for me”? The head position of the mother suggests she’s on a mission to get them to the water.

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I love this family portrait Peter. The goslings are so cute and fuzzy. I kind of like the fact that they aren’t directly following right behind mom/dad in the exact same direction, but seem to be checking out their great big new world a bit.

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Hi Dennis, Allen Sparks, Allen Books & Ed
Thank you for your comments. It is always fun to watch these littles one trying to catch up with Mom.
Peter