Critique Style Requested: Standard
The photographer is looking for generalized feedback about the aesthetic and technical qualities of their image.
Colors disappear
It was very beautiful
Autumn is over
As always all feedback is more than welcome
F11, 1/20, iso 500, 24-120 at73mm
It’s a lovely scene, Ben. I’d suggesting lowering the highlights in the background and sky on the right side of the image. Otherwise I don’t see anything I’d change.
Love the feel of your image, Ben and also your verse. Both are wonderfully gentle.
A beautiful scene and the perfect haiku to accompany it Ben! My only suggestion would be to tone down the fog on the right side of the image just a touch as it does catch my eye a little. You captured the last bit of autumn with those lovely yellow leaves. Very nicely done; this has a soothing peaceful vibe to it.
@linda_mellor , @Ed_Lowe , @Don_Peters . Here my much too late answer on your feedback. I am always happy if you like the haiku. It’s for me a good way to tell about what I saw or felt making an image.
I made a rework and toned down the highlights a bit. It brings an other feel to the image
Thank you all.
