Driving on the Sky Road in the Clifden area in Ireland, hoping for a sunset that I knew wasnt going to be realistic - but then the clouds gave me a few rays of hope!
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I am sure there will quite a few artistic visons of this one - including Black and White - lets see what you have to say
Karl this is one of the best sun rays over water that I’ve seen. I agree with @Diane_Miller that there could be a bit more detail in the lower corner shadows, but that’s not a deal killer. This is really a nice shot.
I’m glad that you hung in there Karl, sometimes it pays dividends. This is a very powerful image, there’s nothing subtle about it, but that’s what I love about it. The processing is very bold, but I think you managed to pull it off and make a very interesting statement. I don’t care that it has a “processed” look, it was obviously done with clear creative intent. The processing adds a lot of emotion to the image.
Yeah, this is one of those images that will likely invite a lot of alternate rework suggestions, because your processing is so untypically bold. I almost hate to make any suggestions for tweaks, because you obviously had a very personal creative vision for this. Without tampering with your creative vision too much, I’d suggest a small crop from the bottom, I think it would place more emphasis on the circle of light near the horizon. In addition, I think it helps by placing less emphasis on the heavy darkness of the lower corners, as mentioned by @Diane_Miller and @David_Bostock. I cropped this to 16x10, and liked the way that looked.
@Ed_McGuirk, I think that’s a good idea, or else a gradient burn from the bottom. The reflection below the pool of light does pull the eye toward the bottom a bit.
Initially I intentionally kept the lower corners dark but agree with showing some detail. I have also burnt the bottom of the reflected light in order to one’s attention more focused.
I used a plugin I have called B&W Styler. I chose Fuji Acros as the profile and imitated normal paper. It produced a bit of noise but it should work well on your larger file. I say give it a try…
I think this is much more interesting than what you might have captured with a traditional sunset. Wonderful photograph. I don’t know if I have a preference for the color or the B&W. One of each, please!
A calm sea like that - that’s a very good day in the West of Ireland! I love how the clouds run parallel to the horizon and water. All you needed was for a whale to appear centre stage. Gorgeous shot!
With these rich blue and yellow tones of color, I’d stick with color over B&W. To me switching from color to B&W loses a lot of the emotional impact of the image. If I was to switch to B&W, I would consider a cool toned B&W, to retain some of the emotion the blues bring to the color image.