The Unwanted

Critique Style Requested: Initial Reaction

Please share your immediate response to the image before reading the photographer’s intent (obscured text below) or other comments. The photographer seeks a genuinely unbiased first impression.

Questions to guide your feedback

I didn’t know what to think when I first saw these trees on our trip to New Zealand.

Other Information

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Technical Details

Focal Length 105.0 mm
Aperture f/16
Exposure Time (1/90)
ISO 100

Specific Feedback

Please give me you initial and emotional response to the image.


Critique Template

Use of the template is optional, but it can help spark ideas.

  • Vision and Purpose:
  • Conceptual:
  • Emotional Impact and Mood:
  • Composition:
  • Balance and Visual Weight:
  • Depth and Dimension:
  • Color:
  • Lighting:
  • Processing:
  • Technical:
  • Vision and Purpose: I agree with you. I am not sure what to think, but there are some evergreen trees here which was the challenge.
  • Emotional Impact and Mood: This composition puzzles me and intrigues me at the same time.
  • Balance and Visual Weight: The green is sprinkled throughout, but the dark areas in the scene almost outweigh them.
  • Technical: It almost looks like you did intentional camera movement with this scene.

Thanks for your impressions. I appreciate you checking it out and offering your critique. While hiking I saw this stand of dead pine trees which seemed so bizarre . Not a burn scar like I’m used to. I had to take a image of it without showing the entire scene, I later found out this evergreen was not native to New Zealand and the stand was sprayed with a herbicide to stop the spread of them.

Cool image, but puzzling…
105mm ? (my 105 is a macro)
Looks almost like a piece of flannel

Hi Sandy, thanks for sharing your impression. The image is cropped. Viewing in person I wondered what happened to the trees so I took a shot that later didn’t seem that interesting until I cropped it to try remove some reference surroundings.