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This shot was taken 30 minutes before the attack on the Goose, North Frams Reservoir, looks like a promising place to photograph birds.Thank you for stopping by.
Peter

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Canon R5, Canon 100-500mm & 1.4ext, f10, 700mm, 1/1600, ISO 2500, and cropped by20% in DXO PhotoLab 8


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The lines of geese in the background work nicely, Peter. For the story I think you’re trying to tell, I wish the eagle were facing at an angle toward the lone goose and didn’t have it overlapping it’s head. Technically the image is excellent.

Peter
I want to thank a few people for their assistance over the years. As you know, Parkinson’s can be a real challenge and I am slowly getting worse or faster than I should be. I can’t remember how much I’ve told you, but I know you were aware that I’m a lot worse than you are.
Just as a refresher: I’ve got pretty bad dystonia in my hamstrings for 3 1/2 years and I have been really unable to sit down without excruciating pain for that whole time. There aren’t many things you can do for dystonia. Along with that, my gastroparesis has become significantly worse. I’m nauseated constantly. Eating can be a challenge and I’ve lost over 100 pounds. Have constant chronic insomnia need to take multiple medication’s just To sleep. Walking is a challenge. I do have a walker. I prefer not to use it, but I have to. I could barely pick up my Sony A1 and 24 to 70 zoom. I even have to laugh when I look at The Tele photo lenses because they are so heavy. I might be able to use it with a tripod go to sleep.
So this coming February 19, I’m going to the University of Washington and I’m going to have deep brain stimulation surgery at six in the morning. Hopefully it will affect my dystonia in the proper manner and that it will loosen me up because I am really stiff. If I’m fortunate, I’ll be able to cut back on some of the medication‘s that got me so constipated that I can’t have a bowel movement without an enema.
Yeah, that bad!

Well, the surgery will probably make me a little more comfortable and I’ll be able to enjoy some quality of life, but it doesn’t stop the Parkinson’s from continuing to deteriorate. Who knows?

So better news now! On February 19, I go into the University of Washington Hospital and get deep brain stimulation surgery, which should help reduce my dystonia, make me a little less stiff, perhaps decrease my medication load and reduce the constipation. Maybe a dream come true.

Just curious, do you know anyone else besides us who has Parkinson’s and is in the photo group?

I haven’t told that many people about it, but David Kingham, Diane Miller, Dennis Plank and yourself .

As far as I’m concerned, it is a really shitty disease.
I don’t know if you’re aware of it but Rytary It’s going generic and will be replaced by a more expensive drug. I take Rytary At least six or seven times a day at the high dose period. Pricey stuff, but can’t come close to the nuplazid At $6000 a month. Good thing for Medicare.

Wish me luck on the surgery!
David Schoen

And a big thanks to everyone who has helped me out over the years to become a much better photographer all of the results of this wonderful website.

Prayers for you David on your upcoming surgery. Hope it is very successful. So sorry you and Peter are having to deal with this.

A fine image Peter that adds to the story from your other post.

Thanks Allen!
David

Here’s hoping for the best, David. As a retired neurologist, I have second hand experience of what you are going through, and, unfortunately, your condition seems worse than most. I have seen good results from the DBS and hopefully you will as well. I found your question about others in the photo group with PD interesting. I belong to a photo club and there have a handful of people in the club with PD, probably a greater percentage than in the general population. In my practice, the PD patients, as a group, were among my most pleasant. I commented on this to a staff neurologist at the medical school in Portland and he thought the same. I associate this with a Type B personality and I wonder if this isn’t the personality type of many photographers-I think you have to be somewhat laid back and patient to enjoy the photographic process and get good results. Again, I sincerely hope your surgery goes well and you (and we) can enjoy more of your photography.

Allen

I guess I was unaware that you were retired neurologist. So yes I’m a mess. There’s so much going on so many people who don’t know enough in the medical fields. Unfortunately I know too much. I’m hoping the DBS surgery makes a big difference. If I could reduce my medication load Of Rytary Perhaps I will have less constipation. Not sure what I could do about the nausea related to the gastroparesis. I take way too much ondansetron And because of the surgery in less than a week, I had to stop all my ginger. They aren’t too many choices out there with respect to nausea.

I’ll certainly bring you into the loop after things happen and let you know how it went.

Thanks for your contributions to the website. Npn And thank you for all your thoughtful critiques.

David

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Hi David
I just got off the phone with Steve Erwin, a friend I have known for 30 years. He has had Parkinson’s for a long time and has had that operation. It did help with his dystonia. Steve also said if you can have the battery implanted while you are in the hospital, it would be better than coming back in two weeks. It will take some time to fine tune the deep brain probes.
I know about Rotary going generic, but that generic will be made by people that made Rotary. Is the
Nuplazid used to help you sleep or do you need it also during the daytime? I use Quetiapine 40mg to help control the dream state at night.
My Rotary intake is 78.75mg/195mg three time a day and 36.25mg/145mg twice a day. I also Nourianz 40mg daily to help control the off times.
Good luck.
Peter

Hi Peter
Unfortunately, I have no control over the second surgery. It’s gonna happen about 10 days after the first surgery and then the programming begins. I’m well aware it’s gonna take a long time for things to happen… but I have no control over it. .
I had Parkinson’s psychosis shortly after my diagnosis and the nuplazid is for that.
I have very little tremor, but a lot of pill rolling. Doesn’t bother me too much. Besides the Parkinson’s meds which are primarily Rytary, I’m on multiple medication’s for constipation and gastroparesis. So there are a bunch of prokinetics to get my stomach moving. One of us is domperidone, which I have to get from Canada. My movement disorder specialist orders it for me. I’m also taking sertraline for anxiety, myrbetriq to keep me from waking up in the middle of the night to pee. I have an overactive bladder. I take carisoprodol 250 mg at bedtime to help me sleep. I’m on diazepam as a muscle relaxant and also to help with my anxiety. I also take misoprostol for the gastroparesis and it helps. Keep my gut moving. The other prokinetic I take is nizatidine which is an old H2 blocker for reflux, but it has significant prokinetic activity. If I have off time, I am usually sleeping through them. So that’s a lot of stuff.

David

Hi David
You are always in my prayers.
Peter

Peter

I really do appreciate your thoughts and your support. As you can see by the information I sent you, I am not in the best situation.

Deep brain stimulation surgery is scheduled for Wednesday morning early. I spend the night in the ICU. And then I get to go home. I think the second surgery is in 10 days and I have been warned that placement of the battery in the shoulder area is not that comfortable But it as a small battery and it’s rechargeable. It could last a week on a charge or only a couple of days depending on how intense the
Dystonia Needs the power.

I will keep you posted.

David

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