Yoho Mountain Goat - Recropped

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Goat on the Rocks

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These were taken from the Trans Canada Highway near Sink Lake in Yoho NP, British Columbia, Canada. I think the goats were sampling the mineral deposits in the rocks near the roadway.

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  1. Canon R5, f11, 1/800s, iso3200, 100-500+1.4tc at 420 mm.
  2. R5, f11, 1/1000s, iso2000, 420 mm.

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I like the eye contact in your first photo. You did an excellent job getting those whites exposed perfectly. I would crop some from the left to provide a vertical comp to strengthen the comp…Jim

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I like the idea @Jim_Zablotny, and I like the result. I think it cleans it up a bit.