A couple of Song Sparrows

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Song Sparrow-NPN.jpg
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20241104-Song Sparrow-CR3-Edit.jpg
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If I had a dollar for every Song Sparrow I’ve shot . . .

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Canon R5; 100-500 with 1.4 TC

  1. 700mm; 1/400 at f10, -1/3EV; ISO 6400
  2. 420 mm; 1/800 at f8, +1/3 EV; ISO 12,800

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Hi Allen, I like both of these images. Great pose in the first one and the spider webs add more interest. I could see a bit more room on the right. I also like the second image with us getting a good look at the head and breast. The three water drops above the bird are also interesting IMO.

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Both are very nice, Allen. With my penchant for half hidden subjects the second is my favorite. Wish I had more visiting the yard, but they like being near water and we only have what I provide.

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I like both, Allen, but I think the first one is my favorite.

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